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1. Bella is a perfect character ("Mary Sue"), which Meyer hides by calling her clumsy. 2. Being clumsy is not a flaw if Edward always catches her. 3. She can't do anything without Edward. 4. And when he leaves she attempts to commit suicide. 5. Meyer is living out her own fantasies by writing about Bella, who is clearly herself. 6. The books aren't well written, just because every other word is a fancy adjective doesn't make it good writing. 7. All the rules Meyer sets for being a vampire are broken by the end of the series. 8. Not only that, she breaks rules set by more esteemed authors. 9. The world population will come to an end be

Chapter 6:A change of plans Kagome sighed as she made her was to the boys tennis courts. She knew that some thing was going to happen she could feel it, but she didn’t know what was going to happen. One thing was for sure she better keep her guard up because if she didn’t, who knows what could happen. As she made her way towards the tennis courts something caught her eye. A petit looking girl with long brown braids practicing tennis by herself, but what really caught her eye was the girls chocolate brown eyes filled with determination even though she fell or missed the ball. Kagome’s eyes soften as she watched the young girl

Chapter 5: Flashbacks kagome was on her way to the tennis courts. She had just got out of her last class. Her day hadn’t been that bad. She had made a lot of friends. Just a couple of hours ago she meet Oishi, Eiji’s double partner. She had been surprised when she had walked into physics and Eiji had clomped her, it almost gave her a heart attack. Flashback “Kagome ” was all she heard and the next thing she knew she was clomped from behind. She turned her head and saw red hair, and she only knew one person with red hair. Kagome sighed as she felt the hot glares from the fan clubs. Some were meant for her and some were

Chapter 4: A chat at Lunch Kagome had just got her lunch and was sitting under a tree watching the sakura blossoms as she ate. She didn’t even notice the people coming until one of them spoke up. “Hey Kagome    ” someone yelled. Kagome looked to her left and saw a Eiji and Fuji.Kagome sat up strait and gave them a smile as she saw them sit down next to her.           “Hi Eiji, Fuji,” She looked at the other two and gave them a short nod as a greeting. “So how do you like the school so far Nya?” Eiji asked “Umm.... it has its ups and downs.” she said with a nervous laugh. Fuji gave her a cirous

Chapter 3:A little class never hurt, and meeting some new friends. She had just walked out of  her Japanese class. Momo said earlier that she has this class with him and another guy named Kaidoh. She saw Momo in the class, but didn’t get to talk to him. She didn’t get to meet the Kaidoh character he told her about. The teacher in that class didn’t let any of them talk during class, and she was seated by a bunch of guys who wouldn’t stop staring at her and it really annoyed her. And now her she is in gym class. She had just finished changing. She hoped they weren’t going to play a stupid game and bore her to death. B

Chapter 2: First day and introductions Kagome woke up to her alarm clock screaming in her ear. She groaned as she slammed her hand on it so the screeching sound would go away and she could go back to sleep. But just as she was about to drift back to sleep Nanako’s voice rang through the air saying if she didn’t get up now she would be late for her first day at her new school. Kagome groaned as she got out of the warmth of the bed and headed to her closet to put on her uniform. She sighed as she grabbed her school bag and her tennis bag, and headed down the stairs to the kitchen to eat breakfast. Kagome just sat down at the table

Chapter 1: A new school Kagome didn’t know when it started, but she was playing tennis again. When her mom and divorced she made sure she had no interest  at all in it. Even though she made a promice. Seems like she couldn’t escape tennis, but she didn’t mind all that much. Kagome had lost her mom, little brother, and grandfather in the shrine fire that Inuyasha caused. Inuyasha told her since the jewel was finished he didn’t need her, and that he had already killed her family so she had no reason to live anyway. Kagome was going to prove him wrong. She would live, and she did have family still, her brother Ryoma who sta

RING..... RING..... RING..... RING..... RING..... And the phone rang on in the Echizen house. Nanjiro Echizen yawned as he sat leisurly reading the paper as his wife did the breakfast dishes. Entering the room, his neice asked, "Do you guys want me to get that?" "Nah, just let the machine get it. It's probably just Ryoma's captain calling to make sure he's up and gets to that practice match against St Ruboff or Rudolph or whatever. He left  an hour ago so its pointless to answer." Nanjiro replied. "Well alright," Nanako replied walkin gover to help her aunt put the dishes away. Just then the answering machine picked up. "hey htis is

Ahh~ Another nice calm and quiet - "What!!" ok not so quiet.. "W-What do you mean I have to take your place!?" (y/n) yelled at her twin brother (Male/name). He needed you to take his pace in his tennis match. He pouted and looked at her with pleading (e/c) eyes. "Please (y/n), I broke my wrist and I worked hard to get where I am, so Please!" You sighed and looked at (m/n)'s puppy dog eyes, you puffed out your cheeks and glared at your now teary eyed twin brother. You huffed and nodded, he let out a girlish sqeal and hugged you with his good arm. You let out a light chukle and smiled..but that smile soon turned into a frown when a thought